Old on the left, working model on the right.

First move back, it setup I have changed from having my left elbow at the target to having my elbow pointed down at my hip, after watching some Jimmy Ballad videos it sort of made sense to me to help stopping the drag back inside

Still trying to keep my left elbow pointed down, has made the backswing steeper and to me this is a better position, much more on plane.

At the top, a better plane, but a little bit laid off now, not a massive concern. Overall pretty happy with this position.

Probably the first time in my life I have managed to shallow out the club through transition. I felt like I rolled the club behind me which I have tried before but never got to this position. Super pumped to get here!

Back to some old habits here, but I feel I have a little bit more room to move than I have in the past

Much the same here. Need to get some more work in to take advantage of the back swing work. With shallowing the club I can turn more but I am to used to doing that so once I rep the earlier stages in this is the focus,
So...there it is, a quick swing analysis of before and after. I like the after more but I need to put a lot of work in to make it a consistent reality!